http://www.habnabit.org/poetry/

2007-05-17 [Fetish Dolly Koneko™]: the tune fits with your poem. Download it to see.

2007-05-18 [Sarah;;]: Lol okay then.

2007-05-18 [Linderel]: [_habnabit]: The link is not a very obvious one. :P Coal black wings.

2007-05-18 [_habnabit]: Hmmm. I'm not sure; I think I'll talk to someone else about it. There's no rhyming and little flow, but the imagery is good and your metaphors/similies aren't bad.
If nothing else, at least it's not bad poetry. :P

2007-05-18 [Linderel]: Ouch. xD

2007-05-18 [Dark Side of the Moon]: *standing ovation* Bravo! A brilliant read of *~!U Dont Care!~*! Thanks [_habnabit]!

2007-05-18 [_habnabit]: No problem! It was fun. :D

2007-06-02 [Chaotic Serenity]: Umm, I must voice the same concerns Kagome did. Does this mean you think my poems suck or not?(and before you ask the same question, if I didn't like my poetry I wouldn't post it.). If you do think it sucks, I would appreciate being taken off this page. I don't mind being told my work isn't good, but I certainly don't want it showcased as such. Thanks.

2007-06-03 [_habnabit]: If you didn't want it showcased as being bad, you shouldn't have posted it on Elftown. Sorry.
(And yes, it is awful.)

2007-06-04 [Chaotic Serenity]: Alright then. I ask you to take it down asap,including the recording which was very nasty, as it is my copyrighted work. Failure to do so will result in me reporting you to the guards. Since you say my work is awful, instead of being rude and cruel, why not suggest ways to improve people's poetry? All you're doing is making people feel bad, since it's not especially pleasant to be made fun of. Why exert so much energy into making someone else feel like crap? Also, you seem to be such an authority on poetry, where is your work?

2007-06-04 [Linderel]: [Chaotic Serenity] does have a point. If you're going to showcase something like this, no matter whether it is in good or bad light, you need to ask permission. It's common courtesy, you see, at the very least. Some may consider the unauthorised use of their poems copyright infringement.

2007-06-04 [_habnabit]: I submitted a few bad haiku to the Daily Poem a while ago.
(And how am I being rude or trying to make people feel like crap?)

Anyway, the poetry has been removed from the wiki.

2007-06-04 [nopenope]: Yaaayyyzorrzzz! I'm not a bad poet! Thank you <3


You're so mean.

2007-06-04 [Fetish Dolly Koneko™]: Damn...this was just getting interesting. Anyways, I applaud you Aaron [_habnabit]. Wonderful response to [Chaotic Serenity]

2007-06-04 [ffasdf]: HAB. You haven't read the poetry of Kat's I sent you yet! >:T

2007-06-04 [_habnabit]: I'll do Kat's when I get home.

2007-06-05 [ffasdf]: Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay squared. <3

2007-06-05 [Chaotic Serenity]: I very much appreciate your cooperation in taking my poetry down quickly. I believe I also asked to have the recording taken off. However, I can't believe you have to ask how you're being rude or making people feel like crap. On the recording you did of mine, you claimed I was such a prolific bad poet that you couldn't read all of mine for fear of losing your voice. If you don't understand how that sort of comment will make someone feel terrible, then you are without compassion or a conscience. I suppose one could argue that I should develop a thicker skin, but such is life.

2007-06-05 [_habnabit]: An edited version of my recording has been posted and will not be removed as it is fair use of copyrighted material and not libelous.

2007-06-06 [Chaotic Serenity]: That's fine. I almost truly hate to admit this...but when you read 'I'm Dreaming' and got to the end, I *mumblekindagiggledmumble* >>...<<....

2007-06-13 [Aquatarkus]: I still want the video youtube edition!